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(this is a original story not a fanfic!!!)
It was a cold and stormy night, all the lights had just been turned out in the old castle and the grounds keeper had gone to bed. There was no one around to se me come in. I was normaly lounging by the grounds keeper's door but, because of he rain I was forced inside the casle. It surprised me to see that it was so big. When I first brought here I wanted to see the inside of it. During the day I could never go in though for feaqr of being stepped on by the turists. Then at night I had to watch over my owner, old mister Jacobson, in my cat form. But tonight I got to go in because he forgot to take me insie with him. I walked around the corner slowly changing into a normal human girl, and looked out the window. Outside you could see he thunder iluminate the ocean, it was beautiful. As I watched I could slowly start to feel my hair stick on end and hear someone coming in the room, Mister Jacobson always told me that he hated working here at night and that this castle was haunted by the family that lived here before. I turned around only o find that it was my friend. He was also like me and could change his apperance to that of a rat. I never knew that there were others like me with this strange gift till the day I met him.
"Hey there, why arn't you inside the caretakers cottage?"
"He forgot to get me from the porch."
"Oh that is to bad, but at least now you get to finaly come in here."
"Yeah, it's really cool in here."
"Ya want to go get some food from the kitchen? You know that it is always stocked in there."
"Sure, I'm starving Mich.
As we walked I started thinking about what Jacobson's ghosts would look like, I imagined that there would be a mom and dad with a son, but I figured taht what he was really hearing was just Mich.
It is okay but I like your other stories better then this one (I like this one so there :'P)
It's good I can't wait for the next one (thank you :'))
thank you I'll make the next one soon since I get time in class but I will work on the other ToS stories there to, also, read, write, vote, and enjoy please
Thanks for atleast reading it and even though you don't like it I will still put other parts up you just don't have to read them. And I will be continuing the ToS story in a little bit as soon as I get done with the game and feel like writing on it some more :'P